Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana D

These notes are from: Valmiki's Hermitage, by Donald A. Mackenzie from Indian Myth and Legend.

Plot:


  • FOR REAL??
  • Okay, Rama is lowkey a jerk
  • He should stand up for Sita
  • She proved that she was virtuous- even the gods said so!
  • The villagers are a bunch of gossips
  • Okay, Valmiki is now my fave- a woodland poet- love that
  • 16 years later and Sita has some sons
  • Rama feels bad- horse sacrifice 
  • Oh, Sita's sons are fighting with the horse!
  • They fight the army- probably a bad idea
  • Rama shows up!
  • OMG IS HE THE DAD? 
  • I kinda don't like that

Notes/Story Ideas

  • I'm a bit surprised that Rama is acting this way.
  • I feel bad for Sita
  • To rewrite this, Sita would leave Rama for good (since he doubted her)
  • Then he would weep in sadness for her
  • Then she would marry Valmiki and they would take over the kingdom!
  • Leave him girl! 
  • Team Sita
Image Info: 
Sita in Exile (painted by Raja Ravi Varma)
Found on: Wikipedia

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